It looks well argued, and the final two points seem to be very clear, and key to the issue.
I'd not worry too much about the timing - I tend to find that I speed up slightly when 'live' compared with when running through in advance - so adding an off-the-cuff ", an illegal change of use," shouldn't break anything, espcially so near the end.
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Date: 2005-09-07 01:39 pm (UTC)I'd not worry too much about the timing - I tend to find that I speed up slightly when 'live' compared with when running through in advance - so adding an off-the-cuff ", an illegal change of use," shouldn't break anything, espcially so near the end.
Best of luck with it.